英検1級道場－2016-3英作文の採点で疑問が残ります
2022-1英検1級、準1級、2級の英作文問題を研究します
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解答例という表現ですが、当然、模範例文の位置づけのはずです
試験会場でこれを書けと言われても絶対に無理ですが、一歩でも近づくことができるように練習しましょう
＜1級＞
●Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
●Give THREE reasons to support your answer.
●Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
●Suggested length: 200 240 words
●Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your answer sheet. Any writing outside the space will not be graded.
TOPIC
Agree or disagree: Genetic engineering will have a positive influence on society in the future
英検解答例
Although still in its infancy, genetic engineering will be a tremendous boon to future societies. Specifically, the technology will eliminate genetic diseases, help protect wildlife, and stabilize the global food supply.
Genetic engineering has potentially life-changing health applications.
For example, the technology has opened the door to the possibility of identifying fatal diseases early or neutralizing genetic defects before birth.
In addition to the improvement in individual quality of life, the long-term significance of healthier populations only reinforces the importance of this technology.
The environmental implications of genetic engineering are also pertinent.
Accelerated by unprecedented industrialization, global warming has become one of many factors behind the dwindling number of wildlife species.
Genetic engineering, however, could help bring back extinct species and strengthen the genes of endangered ones, which would benefit society greatly as healthy ecosystems are a key source of many resources indispensable for modem needs.
Finally, genetic engineering offers modem--day solutions that promise lasting impacts on future generations.
Growing populations are putting greater strain on the global food supply, which is already at the mercy of worsening climate change.
Genetic modification, however, could boost yields and create more-resilient crops, both of which would prove vital in famine-stricken areas and regions with poor climates.
Therefore, tackling human health issues, the issue of endangered species, and the escalating food crisis via genetic engineering underscores just how invaluable a tool such technology will be for effecting positive society.
問題に指示された通りの記述です。
・トピックの答えになっている
・Introduction/Main body/Conclusionの構成になっている
・理由を3つ書いてある
・241ワード
・内容も英文の質も完璧です
＜準1級＞
●Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
●Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
●Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
●Suggested length: 120 150 words
●Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your answer sheet. Any writing outside the space will not be graded.
TOPIC
Should people’s salaries be based on their job performance?
Points
•Age
•Company profits
•Motivation
•Skills
英検解答例
In my opinion, from the perspectives of motivation and company profits, people's salaries should definitely be related to their job performance.
To begin with, while standardized salaries for workers in companies today are common, the level of motivation among employees can vary greatly.
Rewarding enthusiastic employees who produce better work with higher salaries is not only fair but would also have the wider benefit of motivating other employees.
Additionally, the efforts that employees put into performing their work duties well ultimately benefit companies by increasing their profits. One of the responsibilities of a business is said to be the distribution of profits to those who contribute to its growth. Therefore, to fulfill this responsibility, companies must make sure that salaries match workers' job performance.
To conclude, when considering the importance of employee motivation and sharing company profits, I feel that people's salaries should be based on their job performance.
問題に指示された通りの記述です。
・トピックの答えになっている
・Introduction/Main body/Conclusionの構成になっている
・理由を2つ書いてある
・148ワード
・内容も英文の質も完璧です
＜2級＞
●以下の TOPIC について，あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。
●POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。ただし，これら以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。
●語数の目安は80語～10語です。
●解答は，解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。なお，解答欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。
●解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や，TOPIC からずれていると判断された場合は，0点と採点されることがあります。TOPIC の内容をよく読んでから答えてください。
TOPIC
Some people say that it is necessary for people to go to important historical sites in order to understand history better. Do you agree with this opinion?
POINTS
・Experience
・Motivation
・Technology
英検解答例
I agree that it is necessary for people to go to important historical sites to understand history better.
First, people can experience the actual scale of historical sites, such as the pyramids in Egypt.
They cannot experience this by seeing these sites online, even with today's advanced technology.
Second, visitors will have the opportunity to talk to local people. These people have stories about local history which include important information that is not in books. Such stories can make people want to learn more about history.
For these reasons, I think people should visit historical sites.
問題に指示された通りの記述です。
・トピックの答えになっている
・Introduction/Main body/Conclusionの構成になっている
・理由を2つ書いてある
・95ワード
・内容も英文の質も完璧です
