英検1級道場-6月英検1級新傾向に備えて－皆さんの意見を伺います
英検1級の2022-3の英作文トピックはこれでした
Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
Give THREE reasons to support your answer.
Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
Suggested length: 200－240 words
Topic: Agree or disagree: Industrialization has had an overall beneficial effect on humankind
3年近く経っていますが、今出題されてもまったく違和感がありません
私のスタンスは、
・工業化によって公害、環境汚染、地球温暖化などの問題が発生したが、産業化がもたらした下記の恩恵の方がはるかに大きい
・工場での大量生産でモノ安く大量に作られるようになり、人々の生活が便利で豊かになった
・工業化によって大量の職場が生み出され、人々の所得が増し、生活が豊かになった
・工業化に伴ってあらゆる方面で技術革新がなされ、経済活動が進み、生活レベルが向上した
下記はこれを英語で書き、AIに添削してもらったものです
私はいいできだと思っているのですが、皆さんの評価はどうでしょうか
因みに、添削は1秒でやってくれました！
恐るべしAI
I agree that industrialization has had an overall beneficial effect on humankind. Although it has caused problems such as pollution and global warming, the positive impacts on our lives are far greater.
First, industrialization made it possible to produce goods in large quantities through factory systems.
As a result, many products became cheaper and more available to the public.
This made daily life more convenient and allowed people to enjoy a higher standard of living.
Second, industrialization created a great number of jobs.
People who once depended on farming could now earn stable incomes by working in factories and related industries. This increase in income improved people’s ability to afford housing, education, and healthcare, which helped reduce poverty.
Third, industrialization led to many technological innovations.
These developments helped expand economic activity in areas like transportation, communication, and manufacturing.
Our lives have become safer, faster, and more efficient thanks to these innovations.
Of course, industrialization has also brought environmental challenges, including air and water pollution and climate change.
However, many of these problems are now being addressed through technology and international cooperation.
The overall benefits of industrialization—especially in improving living conditions—are still greater.
In conclusion, despite its drawbacks, industrialization has greatly improved human life.
It has brought progress, comfort, and opportunity to people around the world.
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