英検1級道場－最強の英作文勉強方法はこれです

本日、2025-1英検1級1次試験の受験票が届きました

6月1日（日）
私は、千葉県習志野市　千葉日本大学第一中学高等学校で受験します
57回目の受験です
これまで54勝2敗
何度受けても緊張します

13：20着席終了

いつも通りなら
14：00筆記試験開始
15：40終了
15：42頃からリスニングが始まり、16：15頃終了

長丁場の、とても体力と気力を要求する試験です

いつも行くのが嫌になるのですが、理由は簡単です
英作文でどんなトピックが出るのか不安なためです

多くの人が同様だと思うので、私が取り組んで効果的だと思う方法をお伝えします

・市販の参考書の作文例を見ても、立派すぎるし、人の意見なので覚えられない！

そこで、
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2012-1Can the global demand for water be met in the future?

・現在80憶の人口が2050年に100億に増え、水の不足が不安視されているが、この問題は下記の方法で解決できる
・節水－政府による国民への呼びかけ、節水タイプの機器・器具普及など
・貯水－ダム、貯水池などの活用、改善
・海水（地球の表面面積の70％は海水）を淡水に変える技術を進める―装置のコスト削減

The global population is projected to reach nearly 10 billion by 2050, intensifying concerns about water scarcity. However, with strategic interventions, it is possible to meet future water demands.

Firstly, water conservation is paramount. Governments and organizations can promote the use of water-efficient appliances and fixtures, such as those labeled by WaterSense, which can reduce household water use by at least 20% without compromising performance . Public awareness campaigns and incentives can further encourage individuals and industries to adopt water-saving practices.

Secondly, enhancing water storage infrastructure is crucial. Constructing and maintaining dams, reservoirs, and rainwater harvesting systems can help capture and store water during periods of abundance for use during shortages. For instance, initiatives like the construction of check-dams and ponds have proven effective in improving groundwater recharge rates .

Lastly, advancing desalination technologies offers a promising solution. Innovations have significantly reduced the cost of desalinating seawater, making it a more viable option for augmenting freshwater supplies . Moreover, integrating renewable energy sources into desalination processes can mitigate environmental impacts and enhance sustainability.

In conclusion, while the challenge of meeting global water demand is significant, a combination of conservation efforts, improved infrastructure, and technological advancements in desalination can collectively address future water needs.203


2016-3Should the death penalty be banned in Japan?

賛成
・死刑制度は廃止すべきである
・①文明国で死刑制度が残っている国はほとんどなく、日本は野蛮国として外国から蔑視される
・②冤罪で処刑された場合、取り返しがつかない
・③死刑にしないで一生涯獄中で懲役刑をさせる方が償いになる
・凶悪犯罪者であっても獄中で矯正し社会復帰させるべきである（人間は誰にでも間違いがある）
・上記の理由で死刑は廃止すべきである

The death penalty has long been a subject of debate in Japan. While public opinion largely supports its retention, I argue that Japan should abolish capital punishment for several compelling reasons.

Firstly, the risk of wrongful executions cannot be overlooked. The case of Iwao Hakamada, who spent over 45 years on death row before being acquitted in 2024 due to fabricated evidence and a coerced confession, highlights the fallibility of the justice system. Such irreversible errors underscore the dangers of maintaining the death penalty .

Secondly, Japan's continued use of capital punishment places it among a minority of developed nations. Over 70% of countries worldwide have abolished the death penalty in law or practice, including all European Union members. Japan's stance attracts international criticism and may tarnish its global reputation .

Furthermore, life imprisonment without parole offers a humane alternative that allows for the possibility of rehabilitation. Even individuals convicted of heinous crimes can reflect on their actions and contribute positively within the prison system. This approach aligns with the belief in the potential for human reform.

In conclusion, abolishing the death penalty in Japan would eliminate the risk of executing innocent individuals, align the country with international human rights standards, and uphold the value of human life. It is a necessary step toward a more just and compassionate society.220


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