英検1級道場-英作文の採点基準について、元受講者から意見が届きました
ChatGPTを有効活用することで、業務効率、学習効果を驚異的に向上させることができることは、これまでも度々紹介してきました
今日は、条件を細かく設定したり、出し直しを指示することで、目的にかない、満足のいく作品を得るための工夫を紹介します
■英作文作成に関して、下記のような細かな指示を出しました。英文は、いかにも本人が書いたように見えそうな文体で書きました。
トピックはこれ
私のスタンスはこう
私は13歳の日本の中学生
アメリカの中学生が学校で習う範囲の単語を使って書いてね
200字以内でお願い
Please could you write an essay for me.
TOPIC: Will the increasing reliance on robots and computers with AI pose a threat to society?
My stance is No. I believe that benefits we can obtain from them are much bigger than challenges.
I am a 13-year-old Japanese Junior high school student.
I want you to write the essay using the words that ordinary American Junior high school students learn at school. Length of the words should be within 200 .
1秒も経たないうちにタイピンが始まり、下記のような立派な作品を得ることができました
ChatGPT
Title: Embracing AI and Robots: A Bright Future
In today's fast-paced world, robots and computers powered by Artificial Intelligence (AI) are becoming an integral part of our daily lives. While some people worry that these advancements might pose a threat to society, I believe that the benefits we can enjoy from them are much more significant than any potential challenges.
Firstly, AI and robots can enhance our lives in countless ways. They can assist doctors in making accurate diagnoses and performing surgeries, ultimately saving lives. They can also help with mundane tasks, such as cleaning our homes or delivering packages, making our lives more convenient and efficient.
Moreover, AI-driven technologies have the potential to address environmental challenges. They can optimize energy usage, reduce waste, and even help combat climate change. For instance, self-driving electric cars can reduce pollution, making our cities cleaner and more sustainable.
In the field of education, AI-powered programs can provide personalized learning experiences, catering to each student's needs and abilities. This can lead to better educational outcomes and help bridge learning gaps.
Furthermore, robots can be our companions, providing support and assistance to the elderly or people with disabilities. They can offer companionship, monitor health, and even remind individuals to take their medications.
While it is essential to acknowledge potential challenges, such as job displacement, it's crucial to remember that technology has always transformed the way we work. New jobs will emerge, focusing on maintaining and developing these advanced technologies.
In conclusion, the increasing reliance on robots and computers with AI is not a threat to society but rather a remarkable opportunity. These technologies can improve our lives, solve complex problems, and make the world a better place. Embracing AI and robots while addressing potential challenges can lead to a brighter and more prosperous future for all of us. 295 words
■ところが、295ワードあるので、文句を言い、200字以内で書くように指示しなおしました
1秒も経たないうちに下記が届きました。お詫びと共に、194ワードに短縮した作品です。
Thank you very much for your work. but, I specifically asked you to write it within the limit of 200words in length. Please shorten the work accordingly.
ChatGPT
I apologize for the oversight. Here's a shorter version of the essay within the 200-word limit:
Title: Embracing AI and Robots: A Bright Future
In today's world, robots and AI-powered computers are becoming a part of our daily lives. Some worry about the threats they might pose, but I believe the benefits are much greater.
AI and robots can make our lives better in many ways. They help doctors make accurate diagnoses and perform surgeries, making healthcare safer. They also assist with everyday tasks like cleaning our homes and delivering packages, making life easier.
Additionally, these technologies can help solve environmental problems. They can save energy, reduce waste, and fight climate change. Electric cars that drive themselves can make our cities cleaner.
In education, AI can personalize learning, helping students do better in school.
Robots can also be companions for the elderly and people with disabilities. They can offer company, check health, and remind people to take medicine.
While there are challenges, like job changes, technology has always transformed work. New jobs will appear, focusing on these advanced technologies.
In conclusion, relying on AI and robots is not a threat but an opportunity. They can improve our lives, solve problems, and make the world better. Embracing them while addressing challenges can lead to a brighter future for all. 194 words
平易にして、立派な文章です
皆さん、細かく条件設定し、納得できるまで書き直しさせましょう!
10人の優秀なアメリカ人スタッフを雇ったような気分です
これを見ると、いわゆる翻訳業や、英作文添削をする仕事は無くなることが確実だと言って差し支えないと思います
私たちが必要なのは、これを素材として仕事や勉強に活用する企画力です