英検1級道場－2019-1英検1級1次試験英作文・英検解答例の研究

下記が2019-1英検1級1次試験英作文問題です
書き方について細かく指示しています

●Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
●Give THREE reasons to support your answer.
●Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
●Suggested length: 200-240 words
●Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your answer sheet.
●Any writing outside the space will not be graded.

TOPIC
Agree or disagree: Infectious diseases will become a bigger problem in the coming decades

下記は英検が速報の中で紹介した「解答例」です
これについてコメントしていきます

●Write an essay on the given TOPIC.　→要するに、出した課題に対して答えになっているかという点を見られるのですが、完璧です
●Give THREE reasons to support your answer.　→第2、3、4段落で一つずつ述べています
●Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion　→introduction：第1段落, main body：第2、3、4段落, and conclusion第5段落という構成であり、完璧
●Suggested length: 200-240 words　→242単語ですが、採点者は単語数を実際は数えているとは思えません、解答用紙の25-30行に納まっていればOKと判定しているはずです
　　Infectious diseases have been plaguing human populations throughout the course of history.
Despite scientific advances that benefit healthcare, the three main factors of population growth, globalization, and widespread poverty mean such diseases will, unfortunately, become an even bigger problem in the coming decades.
イントロの中に、メインボディで論ずる3つのポイント： population growth, globalization, and widespread povertyを紹介していて、文字通り、次に来る段落の紹介になっている

As Earth's population increases, it becomes easier for infectious diseases to spread.
As much of the planet becomes densely populated, close contact among people creates an ideal environment for disease outbreaks and epidemics.
What is more, as human populations encroach on animal habitats, germs harbored in these animals can more easily infect people.
ここは、population growthについての記述

People are also increasingly mobile, and more travel will make it harder to track and halt disease outbreaks.
Disease-spreading organisms such as insects are often transported along with people, making it likely that infections once limited to local populations will become problematic globally.
To make matters worse, doctors will struggle to diagnose diseases previously unseen in their areas.
ここは、 globalizationに関する記述

The developing world will be particularly vulnerable.
With limited access to healthcare and medicine, populations in developing nations could be decimated by the spread of a lethal infection.
Moreover, as urban slums grow larger, unhygienic conditions and lack of access to clean water will make it easier for infections to occur.
ここは、widespread povertyについての記述です

Population growth, globalization, and poverty are rampant in the world today.
Given the current situation, it is hard to imagine a scenario in which infectious diseases do not pose an increasingly significant challenge in the coming decades.
結論部分です、イントロで述べた内容の重複と言えなくもないですが、首尾一貫しています


参考：

2020-2　英検1級1次試験英作文の研究
https://mbp-japan.com/chiba/eiken/column/5068422/

2020-1 　英検1級1次試験英作文の研究
https://mbp-japan.com/chiba/eiken/column/5059368/

2019-3　英検1級1次試験英作文の研究
https://mbp-japan.com/chiba/eiken/column/5045296/

2019-2　英検1級1次試験英作文の研究
https://mbp-japan.com/chiba/eiken/column/5036890/



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