英検1級道場－英作文についてのやりとり
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6月の試験から英作文の傾向が変わります
大きな変化は2つ
①6つのPOINTSが無くなり、論点を自分で考えなくてはならない
②文字数が200～240に増えた ＊これまではaround200
英検1級合格を目ざして果敢に取り組んでいる英検仲間の一人が、新傾向に沿った英作文を書いてくれました
トピックは、Will fossil fuels such as oil and gas still be the world’s main source of energy in the coming decades?
2015-3で出たお題を使いました
英検は尊敬すべきすばらしい試験ですが、英作文の採点について（だけ）は、首をかしげたくなるような事実がふんだんにあり、指導が困難な状況です
英作文以外で40-60点くらいの人は、ほぼ全員が、英作文で20-24点もらい、英作文以外で65-80あたりの人は、設問に沿ってしっかり書き、英作文添削ネイティブから24-26点の評価をもらう力があっても、英検の採点では12-20点などの低い得点が目立つことです
2015-3で22点もらった人がこう表現しています 「小学生が書くような作文でもこんな点数がもらえるんだ」
今回紹介する下記の作品は、単語力がある人で、作文もかなり鍛えています
皆さんの評価や考え方はどうでしょうか
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I don’t think that fossil fuels will be still the main source of energy in the coming decades. The fact is that many developed countries try to change their energy from fossil fuels to renewable energy such as wind and solar power. There are three reasons why fossil fuels will no longer be the main energy in the future world.
In terms of environmental impact, CO2 emission problem is a talk of the town in every developing country. This fact is the cause of global warming. To prevent this phenomenon, for example, in Japan, some houses are using solar panel when they get electric energy.
When it comes to public opinion, we tend to agree to use renewable energy from nature. Hokkaido in Japan, for example, farmers are producing farming crops using tidal wave. Using renewable sources from nature has become popular in dairy industry.
Finally, technology concerning use of renewable energy has remarkably developed in developed countries recently. To make renewable energy policy push forward, the government tries to give subsidy to companies whose R&D departments are trying to investigate the use of natural power.
In conclusion, even though experts may say that we don’t need new energy except fossil fuels because new oil fields are being found one after another in the world. However, from above reasons, I dare say that fossil fuels will alternate into another renewable energy in the coming decades.
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