英検1級道場－英作文の書き方について、造詣の深い人から意見を聞きました
英検1級の2012-3 の英作文トピックはこれでした
Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
Give THREE reasons to support your answer.
Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
Suggested length: 200－240 words
Topic: Does more need to be done to address Japan's low birthrate?
13年経っていますが、今出題されてもまったく違和感がありません
つまり、13年前に議論されていた点がまったく解決していないのです
ですから、このトピックへの答えとして私は下記の主張を考えました
私のスタンスは、とにかく、結婚して子供をつくれば得をする社会の仕組みにすること
・政府はもっと対応すべきである
・理由は少子化が進む一方で、歯止めがかからないこと
・問題の核心は若い男女が結婚しないこと
・若い男女が安心して結婚生活を送れるような社会の仕組みをつくること
・結婚奨励策：結婚したら奨励金を出すことも検討可能
・子供を増やす策：分娩費用は無料とする、高校まで子供の医療費と教育費を無償にする
下記はこれを英語で書き、AIに添削してもらったものです
私はいいできだと思っているのですが、皆さんの評価はどうでしょうか
因みに、添削は1秒でやってくれました！
恐るべしAI
Japan’s declining birthrate is one of the most serious challenges facing the nation today.
The number of children is decreasing year after year, and without bold action, the country’s future will be at risk.
I strongly believe that more needs to be done to address this problem.
First, the main reason for the low birthrate is that many young people hesitate to get married.
They are worried about unstable jobs, high living costs, and the difficulties of raising children.
The government should therefore build a social system in which young men and women can marry and start families with confidence.
Second, concrete financial support is essential.
For example, the government could provide special allowances for newly married couples.
In addition, childbirth expenses should be completely free.
If families do not need to worry about such high costs, they will be more willing to have children.
Third, the burden of raising children must be reduced.
The government should make medical care and education free until the end of high school.
Parents will then know that they can raise their children without being crushed by financial pressure.
In conclusion, Japan must create a society where marriage and childbearing bring clear benefits.
Only by doing so can the nation stop the decline in population and secure a stable future.
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