英検1級道場－英語は同一の単語の繰り返しを極端に嫌うということの好例を示します

英検準1級の英作文のTOPICに、以下のようなものがありました
Should people stop using goods that are made from animals?

模範解答として公表されている例文は下記のとおりです
注目すべきは単語の用法です
英語は同じ単語を繰り返し使うことを極端に嫌うということの一つの証拠です
英語は、この点に関しては、ここまで「しつこい」のです

＜動物を殺して使うもの＞
animal goods,
goods made from animals,
products made from animals,
real fur,
animal products,

＜人工の代替物＞
alternative products,
artificial goods,
man-made goods,
fake-fur,
alternative goods,
other types of products


I believe that the quality of alternative products and respecting animal rights are reasons why people should not use goods made from animals.

Many products made from animals are being replaced by artificial goods, and technological advancements have greatly improved the quality of these man-made goods.
For example, the quality of fake fur is almost the same as that of real fur.
Such high-quality alternative goods mean that using animal products is unnecessary.

Furthermore, some animal products come from animals living in conditions that restrict their freedom.
However, animals deserve the right to live freely, and this right should not be ignored for the sake of commercial gain.
Therefore, stopping the use of animal-based goods is an effective way to protect animal rights.

In conclusion, the high quality of other types of products and the importance of protecting animal rights mean that people should stop using goods made from animals.