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元受講者の一人が2019-1英検1級1次試験英作文を書いて送ってくれました、
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Agree or Disagree: Infectious diseases will become a bigger problem in the coming decades.
A growing concern in the world nowadays is that infectious diseases will become a bigger problem in the coming decades. In my opinion, it will not become a bigger problem. I would like to explain this cause with three reasons in this essay.
First of all, unlike old times, medical research is further progressed than before. Once an infectious disease is discovered somewhere in the world、 researchers in the world will soon try to find out the causes to prevent it from becoming a pandemic.
Secondly, information technology like face book or twitter will be able to inform people in the world of the symptom quickly if it happens. Every government will be able to think about how they will have to deal with it in advance.
Finally, Immigration Bureau system becomes fur stricter than before in every country. For example, in order to prevent the person who contracts an infectious disease should not be allowed to enter the country by enforcing strict health check.
I would like to emphasize again, in terms of progress of medicine, quick information technology by SNS and stricter check by Immigration Bureau are three reasons why I disagree that infectious diseases will become a bigger problem in the coming decades. (208 words)
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忙しいあなた
休息が必要です
身体のストレッチ、脳波を下げて瞑想をする
1日の中でそんなひと時をもつのはとても意味があります
私は、定休日以外、毎日、スタジオに通って体を鍛え、心の安定をはかっています
体力、気力、集中力、記憶力が高まっています！
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